In the West Macdonnell Ranges of Central Australia our writing guru Jan Cornall taught us these 4 noble truths:
- WRITERS WRITE
- WRITING IS A PROCESS
- YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT YOUR WRITING WILL BE UNTIL THE END OF THE PROCESS
- IF WRITING IS YOUR PRACTICE THE ONLY WAY TO FAIL IS NOT TO WRITE.*
At the finale to this wonderful week of learning, writing,
exploring country, listening to the stories of traditional owners
and visiting secret women’s places,
we presented our work at the Desert Writers’ Festival of Hermannsburg .
While it was good to realise that as writers we cannot fail and that the process is the truth,
the power of our group experience combined with the talent of eight extraordinary women to produce some wonderful examples of writing in a variety of genres including film script, biography, poetry, haiku, memoir, short story and novel.
Athena was asked to present a short precis of her latest
work in progress, Digging Up the Dead as well as to read
a scene she wrote under the mesmerizing influence
of her desert writing experience.
But be warned, as noble truth no 3 asserts,
this may bear no resemblance to the finished work!
Digging Up the Dead
Athena Pallas, nicknamed Pal, is a very unusual Diviner who is summoned in 1992 to Yungaburra, a small mining town in Queensland, by David the mine geologist. After the death of Gary, the blast engineer in the open cut coal mine, and with the coal running out on top, the mine bosses decide to go underground to extract the rest of the coal left in 1972 when a gigantic underground explosion sealed the mine entombing 12 miners. Alice, Gary’s girlfriend and the daughter of George one of the entombed miners joins Naomi, an Aboriginal elder concerned by the mine’s desecration of sacred burial places, to help Athena find out where and how the miners died and to stop the re-opening of the mine. David, Alice and Naomi have a secret ally who is funding Athena’s assignment and gradually other townspeople like Stan the wily newspaper editor and Edgar the enigmatic Mining Warden are drawn into the events that follow.
Mysterious signs and happenings lead Athena to think she may be the mortal manifestation of Pallas Athena,
the Warrior Goddess of Ancient Greece, or
that someone or something is trying to drive her crazy.
In any event she will need all of the powers of this goddess
as well as those of ancestral Aboriginal spirits
to complete her mission and defeat the mine……..
As the plot thickens Athena has a vision of herself at the Gateway to the Underworld where she engages in mortal combat to save George and learn from him what really happened underground in 1972.
……An enormous roar came from the depths of the tunnel like the explosion George had described but I knew that this was no mine explosion because although loud it did not bucket us with a fiery gaseous wind.
However I knew we were in trouble when Cerberus the guardian dog of the Underworld sprung into our presence and sat defiantly on his haunches in front of us.
Up close he was a terrifying sight. With three huge heads all with vicious white teeth he reminded me of the jagged jaws of the continuous mining machines that tore out and swallowed the coal before spitting it into the shuttle cars.
Here the similarity ended for I could see the end of his serpent’s tail between his legs and there were innumerable snakes attached to his body.
The snakes and his tail were deadly
if you were foolish enough to touch them.
I threw my aegis shield over George to try
and protect him from the pernicious poison I knew the Dog had in store for us if I defied him and tried to enter the Underworld.
Cerberus seemed to be able to read my thoughts for suddenly there was a swishing sound and movement of the air in front of me. One of the Dog’s heads moved towards the sound and then the head flung itself towards us.
I grabbed my shield to stop it before I realised it was detached from its mighty body as if it had been decapitated by an invisible sword. The hideous head fell useless at my feet, but I knew that even a two-headed Cerberus was a formidable opponent.
Before I could think of a plan, his whip like serpent’s tail flashed out from between his legs and caught me on the side of my head. Without my helmet I would have been showered with the most toxic substance known to the gods-capable of immobilizing whole armies let alone one woman, albeit the Warrior Goddess and daughter of Zeus.
Recovering from this close encounter with Cerberus’ tail I lost sight of his heads for a moment and he leapt towards me with all his remaining teeth bared. I cried out:
‘Zeus, don’t leave me, I have much to do in mortal realms. I must return above.”
As I yelled these word another decapitated head hurtled towards me………. to be continued maybe …..
The audience clapped enthusiastically when she finished reading this scene but now the writer is left with the task of working out what on earth this means both for Athena and the story!
She will keep you posted maybe…… if she survives…
*From One Continuous Mistake, The Four Noble Truths of Writing by Gail Sher